The Unmoving Great Library

I really enjoy the magic circle in this. It really catches your eyes when you look at it. However I feel as if the crystals are trying to grab your attention as well but end up just kind of hanging around there. The background just doesn't seem to really have much of an impact as it should. Though its a really outstanding shade of violet, it keeps to more blend with Patchouli rather than either giving her the spotlight or contribute to her position (if that makes sense. . . )

Onto Patchouli herself, I think the usage of more clothing wrinkles would do very nicely. It's give more depth and a nicer feel to it. The ruffles are very nice though, I enjoy their shape.~ (Idontevenknow). Her impression could use some improvement. I think Patchouli as a very serious person who would have a look of disdain when she's conjuring up her magic. c:

All in all, I think this is a very lovely piece~ Judging for this, I'm sure your future art will be ten times more impressive~ :3c